Sunday, July 10, 2011

Seventh Summer Stone

                                                  one lone ripe berry
                                                       my patience


Terri L. French said...

this is an excellent haiku, inda! One suggestion, start with a lower case letter and take of punctuation. Really, really good.

Laurie Kolp said...

Yes inda... I like it, too.

Linda H. said...

I hadn't been trying to do a haiku, just a "little stone" thought but I just might make the suggested changes and viola--stone becomes 'ku :-)
Thanks, Terri.

And thank you, too, Laurie.

Linda H. said...