this is an excellent haiku, inda! One suggestion, start with a lower case letter and take of punctuation. Really, really good.
Yes inda... I like it, too.
I hadn't been trying to do a haiku, just a "little stone" thought but I just might make the suggested changes and viola--stone becomes 'ku :-)Thanks, Terri.And thank you, too, Laurie.
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this is an excellent haiku, inda! One suggestion, start with a lower case letter and take of punctuation. Really, really good.
Yes inda... I like it, too.
I hadn't been trying to do a haiku, just a "little stone" thought but I just might make the suggested changes and viola--stone becomes 'ku :-)
Thanks, Terri.
And thank you, too, Laurie.
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